OK i didnt try to play the other one on here, but i didnt recognize it as how i play it, which sounds perfect. here it is: 

E------------------------------------- 
B------------------------------------- 
G------------------------------------- 
D-----------2--------2-----0-------- 
A--3---3------3-3-----3----------- 
E------------------------------------- 

its not my first, but it wont be the last 
Jason 

Also sent in by Isaac Zeccs